Saturday, 6 January 2018

Summer Learning Journey Day 4 Bonus Activity Week Two

One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you… look behind and see fire exploding out of the tanks.
Today for this activity I had to Complete the story provided above. To earn full points you must write, at least, 8-10 sentences. What happens next? I decided to add the image in so that people know what im writing about.


  1. Hi Mele

    It's Allie again from the SLJ team.

    It's great that you have added the image from the activity. But I think that you have misread what you had to do for this activity.
    You need to finish the story starter with 8 to 10 sentences. So this mean you writing a story the finish what has been started for you.

    I really want you to get full points for this activity, but I need you to finish to first.
    Give it a go! I'm sure it will be great.

    Thanks Mele

    Allie :)

  2. Hi Mele
    Well done so far on this summer learning journey activity. Just remember, you need to add another 8-10 sentences to the story to finish it off. Keep up the good work Mele.

  3. Hi Mele
    Great job on completing this activity, I like how you wrote down some sound effects too. I have a question though, how do you think other nurses were feeling?