Friday, 30 October 2015

Inclined Planes

This is my inclined plane poster. I had to write a lot of facts about inclined planes. I add in some images of incline planes on my poster.


This is my double presentation id did by using google presentation. I had to write doubles but even.

Recount Scaffold

Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
Wow as we arrived to Mission Bay beach. I jumped in the water,it felt like I was in snow.

Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives
On Wednesday 7th October at 12:00pm in the afternoon  I went to Mission Bay Beach with my brothers and parents. First me and my family went out to Subway for lunch. In my sandwich I had salad, olives, cucumber and sliced chicken. As we got there I went to swim at the beach. It was so cold and freezing for me to get in the water. I played touch in the water. I had a lot of fun playing and spending time with my family at Mission Bay. We went to Mission Bay for a special family time together. Also we went to Mission bay beach because my dad was tired of staying home and sleeping. As we went to play touch my dad came to join us which was more harder. As my dad ran to get a try it felt like he wasn't playing fair on me and my brother.

First my dad and mum relaxed  and watch the waves move around and round while me and my brothers were making a big sandcastle with sand. As me and my brothers went to build the biggest sand castle we first had to put a lot of sand so that we could decorate the sandcastle after we made it.

Next we had to decorate the sandcastle with shells sticks and leaves. As we started decorating the sand castle I add lots of shells and sticks on the sand castle. Then my dad came to take a photo of it.

Finally we had to pack up our stuff and put it in the van so that we could go back home. As we were about to go we took a family photo together on my dad’s phone.
Sums up how you felt about the experience.

It felt like a relaxed day for me and my family to go to the beach and have a lot of fun playing touch and swimming in the water. It was fun!!
This is my Recount scaffold I made on google document. I had to write something about what I did in the holidays. Also I had to use an orientation which includes Who, When, Where, Why, What, How in my piece of writing.

Thursday, 29 October 2015

Doubles Poster

This is my poster about doubles. I made this by using google drawings. Also I had to add in some pictures and shapes to show doubles.

Tuesday, 27 October 2015

Levers Poster

This is my levers posters. I had to write facts about what is a lever. A lever is one of the 6 simple machines. Also as I finidhed doing my writing I added ins some pictures of levers.

Friday, 23 October 2015


This is my xtramaths results. I got 2 wrong and 43 right. What I need to improve in nest time is to not get anything wrong this time.

Tuesday, 20 October 2015

Today I have been learning what a pulley is. I had to create an poster on pulleys and say what is a pulley. A pulley can be a crane or an flagpole. Also I had to write facts about pulleys. In my poster I also add some images of pulleys so you know what is a pulley.

Monday, 19 October 2015


This is my work poster that I did by using google drawings. I wrote jobs you could do at home. I wrote 12 things about what you could do at home.

My Recount About My Weekend

“Yum” I said to myself. On Saturday my family had a big BBQ at home. It felt like I was going to explore in the air. As my dad brought the BBQ stove to cook the meat inside it. I felt so happy that we were going to have a yum BBQ with my whole family. When I saw the food on the plate my dad said ‘’kids come and eat” so I went to eat a piece of meat. As I took a bite of my meat my tongue was burning. When I grabbed a sausage from the plate It was so hot so I kept on blowing my sausage so that it could get warmer for me to eat. When I ate my sausage it felt more better than me getting a burning tongue. When I finished eating I went to play with my brothers. When me and my brothers played kicks they wouldn't let me play with them so I felt sad and played with my little brother which was more quiet and kind. When me and my little brother played kicks it was so fun. As I played kicks with my brother it felt like he was more kinder to me than my other brothers.When we finished playing we went inside and got a snack to eat. As I finished eating I went to my room and relaxed. When I relaxed I said “it” was a nice summer day today to have a ‘’BBQ’’. Also I said thank you to my parent for planning a BBQ to have on a nice summer day. It was so fun and exciting!!

This is my Writing about what I did in the weekend. I had to include when, Where, Why,Who,What and how in my recount. Also I had to say what I did. In my recount I had to use an hook at the beginning of my story.

Thursday, 15 October 2015

Recount Writing Structure

Today we have been learning about what is a recount. A recount is when you retell and describe past events. Also we use an orientation which includes: Where, When, What, Why, Who and how. Also I learnt that before you write a recount you always have to use an hook which means an interesting begging used in a recount it is used to capture audiences attention an interests levels. We also learnt that a summary means that is is the last sentence of the recount.

Wednesday, 14 October 2015


This is my xtramaths results.I got 2 wrong and 50 right what I need to improve in next time is to get all my results right so that I could move to the next level.

Thinking groups Term 4

This is my thinking groups slideshow.We had to answer the question and use time tables and pluses to make the number 30. Also we had to say how we got the answer.

Tuesday, 13 October 2015

Still Life Reflection

Art Still Life Reflection

  1. What are you most pleased with? Why / why not?
I am pleased with my banana because it is straight and curved.

2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting? I learnt how to blend the colours together so it wouldn’t look like a beach towel.

3. What did you find easy?
I found painting my background easy.

4. What did you find difficult?
I found painting my fruit difficult.

5. Who did helped you with your still life painting?
Miss Paton started me off then I did the rest of the painting.

6. What would you change? why / why not?
I would change my apple and make my fruit a bit bigger.

7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time? I would make my apple a bit bigger so it could look like a shaped rounded apple.

This is my still life reflection work. I had to answer every question and make sure it make scene before i put it on my blog. Also I had to say who helped me what i am really impressed and what I found difficult.

Monday, 12 October 2015


This is my xtramaths results for today. For today I got 2 wrong and 40 right. What I need to improve in nextime is to not get anything wrong and move to my takeaways.