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Sunday, 9 July 2017

Winter Learning Journey-Poem-15

For this activity I had to write a poem.
I had to image that I went on the first waka to arrive at Shag Point. You had never been to New Zealand before and you had no idea what to expect. Write a poem describing how you would have felt when you arrived in New Zealand. Would you have been excited or scared? I would have felt pretty nervous, I reckon…

I felt so frighten

As I arrived the sun was so brighten

Lots of people talking

When I started walking

There had been no on I knew

As someone came behind me saying boo

Scaring me away

I had a terrifying day.
Written By Mele Latuila

4 comments:

  1. Hi Mele,
    I really like your poem, it is really great.
    Keep It up!
    Eric

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  2. Hi Mele
    Nice poem! Would you also feel annoyed at the person who said boo?
    Great work

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  3. Hi Mele. Great poem. I would also be scared and nervous. Keep on working hard.

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  4. Hello Mele
    Great poem. I like how you rhymed most of the words at the end of your sentences. Keep up the fantastic work.
    Daniel

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