Saturday, 16 April 2016

Rewrite the Ending

Rewrite the Ending

If you could rewrite the ending of the story what would happen?  Write a paragraph explaining what you think should have happened.
Post it onto your blog with the following information.
- Title: Jane and the Magician
- Author:Martin Baynton
- Type of Book: Fiction
I would warn them to do not trust the magician, because towards the ending, the magician hurts the villagers by creating a flood and hurting the dragon by letting lighting strike him.

- Why your ending is better: My ending is better because They shouldn't of trust the magician because when Jane saved the Magician he hurts the villages and Jane too.

This is my Holiday reading challenge about Rewrite the Ending. I had to change the ending to my own ending and then I had to write why my ending is better.


  1. Hi Mele,
    maybe next time you should write a ending not explain. I really like how you put all the information about your book.

  2. Hello Mele, I like how you have written why your cover is better and explained what you have done.