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Sunday 10 July 2016

Winter learning Journey- Olympics Poem

Today I did my holiday reading challenge. I had to write a poem describing how I will feel if I travel to Rio 2016 and how I will feel.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Mele
    I think I would exactly do the same thing as you by asking for Usain Bolts signature. Your layout is really good because it's simple and you can see the text properly.

    Great Work Mele!
    Mia-LS2

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  2. Your layout really is very cool, Mele, as is your poem. I think that my favourite line is the final one where you say that 'when you come back to NZ you will share your story with everyone.' It is a great way to conclude the poem.

    Nicely done!

    Cheers, Rachel

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  3. Hi Mele I like your pictures of Usain Bolts and Vadirei Adams, they might be one og your favourite athelets, and I also like your purple layout it looks very amazing. I think my favourite line in your poem is the first one where you wrote 'I would ask for Usian Bolts signature'. Same I would ask for his signature. If you were choosen to meet Usain Bolts what are some question would you ask him.

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  4. Hi Mele
    I really like the pictures of the athletes. Are they your favorites, or did you just chose them randomly? Anyway, great work you have been doing so far so keep it up.
    Daniel

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