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Friday 1 July 2016

Summarising

Text title: Boy on the bike
LI: To look for keywords and phrases

What is happening?
Pedalling, Four wheel drive, Plan
Where is the event happening?
On the beach
Who is involved?
Dad, Mac, Mum
When is the event happening?
A year before he starts his plan
Why did the event occur?
St John would get more ambulances
How did things get started?


Mac planned to raise money for St John by cycling somewhere around New Zealand. He planned that the money would be used to get more ambulances for St John.
What is happening?
Compromising to do Mac’s Plan, Mac would cycle the length of the North Island, Dad would cycle him,
Where is the event happening?

Who is involved?
Craig (Dad), NIne year old Mac,, Mum
When is the event happening?

Why did the event occur?
St John would get more ambulances
How did things get started?


Mac planned to raise money for St John by cycling somewhere around New Zealand. He planned that the money would be used to get more ambulances for St John.



What is happening?
Training, 80 kilometres, Dark in the Winter, Trained in the sun, Training when it is raining
Where is the event happening?

Who is involved?
Dad, Mac
When is the event happening?
In the weekends.
Why did the event occur?
Training to raise money
How did things get started?

Trained in the sun, Dark and through the day.

Dad and Mac got up before dawn to train in the weekends. Some days they would cycle up to 80 kilometres, through the dark of winter, the sun and the rain.


What is happening?
Discussing with St john, Setting up social media page, to promote the fundraising, camping,
Where is the event happening?
Ahipara Camping
Who is involved?
Dad, Mac, St John
When is the event happening?

Why did the event occur?
To get more ambulances for St John
How did things get started?


Mac discussed his scheme with St John. They proposed that Mac should decide how much money he wanted to aim for. His dad even helped him set up a social media page to promote the fundraising.

What is happening?
First day of their big plan, twenty - two days , 96 kilometres, along ninety mile beach,
Where is the event happening?
Ahipara camping grounds
Who is involved?
Mac and Craig
When is the event happening?

Why did the event occur?

How did things get started?
cycled 96 kilometres to Ahipara camping grounds.

It was the first day of their big plan. Mac and his dad eventually arrived at the Ahipara camping grounds after ten. They cycled 96 kilometres through the terrible headwind until they reacher camping grounds.
What is happening?
First day of their big plan was the worst of them all, while cycling mac got fitter, nothing bad happened after the first day,
Where is the event happening?
Ahipara camping grounds
Who is involved?
Mac and Craig
When is the event happening?

Why did the event occur?

To raise money for St JOhn
How did things get started?
cycled 96 kilometres to Ahipara camping grounds.
The first day of their adventure was the worst of them all. They cycled 96 kilometers to Ahipara and arrived there at ten in the night.


What is happening?
Eating,
Where is the event happening?
Ahipara Camping Grounds
Who is involved?
Mac, Craig
When is the event happening?

Why did the event occur?

They had to eat regularly because all that cycling made Mac hungry.
How did things get started?
By cycling an amount of kilometres each day of their adventure,

Each day cycling for long kilometres made Mac hungary so he can do really well.

What is happening?
Twenty two days of cycling, He cycled to Wellington, 1,300 kilometres, Mac’s sad about the end of their big adventure,
Where is the event happening?
Wellington
Who is involved?
Mac, Craig
When is the event happening?
After their twenty two days of cycling
Why did the event occur?
To raise money for St John
How did things get started?
Mac had a big plan

After twenty - two days of cycling, Mac and Craig cycled back home in Wellington. Mac was feeling all different emotions. He was happy about seeing his brother and Mum, after a long time, but sad about having their adventure come to an end.  
What is happening?
Talking about their amazing adventure, learning new things about the big plan, $7,000 dollars was raised and given to St John, Mac thinking about doing the North Island,
Where is the event happening?

Who is involved?
Mac, Craig,
When is the event happening?

Why did the event occur?

How did things get started?
Their big adventure cycling throughout the north island of New Zealand,


Mac and Craig talked about their big adventure and what they learnt from it. $7,000 dollars was raised and given to St John. Mac thinks he should do the south island next time or maybe Cape reinga all the way to Bluff if his parents let him. His dad’s thinking about it.


Summary

Mac planned to raise money for St John by cycling somewhere around New Zealand. He planned that the money would be used to get more ambulances for St John.
Dad and Mac got up before dawn to train in the weekends. Some days they would cycle up to 80 kilometres, through the dark of winter, the sun and the rain.
Mac discussed his scheme with St John. They proposed that Mac should decide how much money he wanted to aim for. His dad even helped him set up a social media page to promote the fundraising. It was the first day of their big plan. Mac and his dad eventually arrived at the Ahipara camping grounds after ten. They cycled 96 kilometres through the terrible headwind until they reacher camping grounds. The first day of their adventure was the worst of them all. They cycled 96 kilometers to Ahipara and arrived there at ten in the night. Each day cycling for long kilometres made Mac hungary so he can do really well. After twenty - two days of cycling, Mac and Craig cycled back home in Wellington. Mac was feeling all different emotions. He was happy about seeing his brother and Mum, after a long time, but sad about having their adventure come to an end. Mac and Craig talked about their big adventure and what they learnt from it. $7,000 dollars was raised and given to St John. Mac thinks he should do the south island next time or maybe Cape reinga all the 
way to Bluff if his parents let him. His dad’s thinking about it.



Today we are learning to look for keywords and phrases. We had to read a article called The boy on the bike. Each paragraph we have to make summaries in 2 sentences. We had to read the article and answer what is happening, where is the event happening, who is involved, when it is happening, why did the event occur and how did things get started. At the really bottom we had to write the summary after a paragraph.











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