Friday, 31 August 2018

Evaluation of my Animated Story

In the context of In the Neighbourhood' I will design and produce 'an animated story' for school students 5 - 13 years old, to be used  to inform the targets of our audiences opinions for different primary, intermediate, and colleges that are available to them in there Tamaki community. My animated story is currently under construction. Could you please help me, by giving me feedback on my conceptual design.


  1. Hi Mele your story Idea is a great and I think telling the life story of someone else is a very smart idea keep up the good work.

  2. Hi Mele,

    Your topic for your animated story can encourage some people to make friends, it can also avoid fights between teams. I really like how you used real life characters to create this animated story, Good Job.