For this activity I had to write a poem.
I had to image that I went on the first waka to arrive at Shag Point. You had never been to New Zealand before and you had no idea what to expect. Write a poem describing how you would have felt when you arrived in New Zealand. Would you have been excited or scared? I would have felt pretty nervous, I reckon…
I felt so frighten
As I arrived the sun was so brighten
Lots of people talking
When I started walking
There had been no on I knew
As someone came behind me saying boo
Scaring me away
I had a terrifying day.
Written By Mele Latuila
Hi Mele,
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem, it is really great.
Keep It up!
Eric
Hi Mele
ReplyDeleteNice poem! Would you also feel annoyed at the person who said boo?
Great work
Hi Mele. Great poem. I would also be scared and nervous. Keep on working hard.
ReplyDeleteHello Mele
ReplyDeleteGreat poem. I like how you rhymed most of the words at the end of your sentences. Keep up the fantastic work.
Daniel
Hello Mele, awesome people. I like how you have added some rhymes into your poem. You have been doing a great job completing the activities so keep on going.
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